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For what it's worth, it's a pleasing photo to look at! The exposure seems to be pretty good, maybe just a little overexposed, but nothing to worry too much about. One thing I notice is the composition could use some work, and this is something that is very common for anyone who doesn't do photography much or is just starting out (if I'm not correct then I'm really sorry XD), and that's making the focus directly in the center of the piece. Right now, my eyes are wondering where the rest of the flower stem is, so I probably would have pitched down a little bit so the dragon fly would be at the top, kind of left region of the picture. By doing this, the piece would have more motion and direction. Sorry for the low originality score, I don't really like rating a piece on originality because to be frank, I don't think every single work of art has to be the most brilliant and original thing in the world. The title states that this is a photo about a dragonfly and the picture doesn't disappoint the title lol. Hope this helps, take care!
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:iconmariahacorn:
wow... I never really expected to get critiques on this work o o *quite surprised*
Oh well, I don't really know what to say.. first of all, thanks a lot for the critique.
I know that I'm not like the best photographer as it's rather only a hobby to capture nice views and moments I don't want to go away.
And well... photographing Dragonflies without having them fly away is... very hard XDD

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Haha, well I like surprising people I guess, plus I'm hoping if I critique people people might come and actually critique my work XD. And trust me I know, bugs are always a pain to photograph >_< Keep it up!

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:iconmariahacorn:
well hopefully people will. Although I have to admit that I most likely won't be one of them because I can hardly move my ass to comment anything at all.. *drop* but good luck anyway and thanks again :3

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It's fine lol, I'm watching like 1000 people now and the only real way to keep up is put 10 hours a day on this site xD

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:iconmariahacorn:
lol okay xDDDD

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Live is deadly... but love is a healthy sin...

Ambiguousness, Senselessness and Insanity forever and ever~ <3

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